Teacher Feedback

Here are the comments that our teacher gave us

• Too much happening, we need to slow the pace of the sequence down to allow the audience to see Jayde's reaction to the messages
  
• We need to take longer to establish the scene, location and character
• We don't need to show the killer, don't need to cross-cut.
• Our plan to use streetlamps for lighting during the outside shots would cause too many issues
• We need to make definate decisions on who our actors will be
• There wasn't a strong enough sense of an opposite - victim vs killer