Feedback

After our rough cut, we asked another group (Tom, Hugh and Tom) to watch our sequence and give us some feedback.

Initially, they were confused as we have not inserted the voice-over so they weren't sure what she was reacting to. However, once we explained it to them, they said they liked the idea and it should be effective once the messages are put in.

Also,they liked the first-person POV shot of Bianca going into her bag.

We also got feedback from our teacher, Mrs Dymioti and the media technician, Mr Deans.

She said that we should have scripted the messages and said it as Bianca was acting so that she would react at the right times. She said that the movement of the shots is fine but the choreography needs to be more natural (when she walks back to the radiator).



Mr Deans said that the shot of Bianca walking back was too long.